Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 2:

·          Level 2, 8–11 marks • Basic skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation. • Basic understanding of issues around audience, institution, technology, representation, forms and conventions in relation to production. • Basic ability to refer to the choices made and outcomes. • Basic understanding of their development from preliminary to full task. • Basic ability to communicate.

Interim grade: Level 2 11/20 Level

Medal & Mission:

1. Pics of bruising required, as evidence of planning costumes etc
2. Some images are not showing, please check
3. Excellent opening title sample/logo
4. Schedule completed
5. No BFI data in evidence

Mission

1. Unfortunately you haven't  completed a number of previous tasks as shown on the 8/12/15 feedback which is really dissapointing, in order to improve from a Level 2 you need to get those tasks completed by half term

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	11
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A

Stage Makeup for 'How to Kill a dead girl'.

For our opening scene, we needed to include bruises and blood as it is about an abusive relationship. Our opening scene involves our character lying in a pool of blood that has come from her head meaning that it would be in contact with her skin. This means that we would have to check that she is not allergic to the fake blood that we used so we did a patch test to check that there would be no allergic reaction.

It also included a bathroom scene in which the character had extremely bruised shoulders to look as though someone has grabbed her from behind with force.

To achieve bruises we used purple, blue, black and green powdered shadow and stage makeup. We started by adding blue patches and blending them out so that they did not look too obvious, we then added a purple shimmer over them and added black parts to the more hollow parts of her body to add emphasis. I then added a small patch of green to the bruise to make it look more realistic. Before we did this, we did another skin patch test to ensure that there was no allergies. We decided to keep the makeup as simple and subtle as possible as our opening scene aims to be quite realistic and emotional so that it has an effect on the audience so we didn't want to make it too over the top, we aimed to keep it looking realistic and subtle

Cast for 'How to kill a dead girl'.

For our film we needed to use a female character who could look around 20 or younger once she is wearing makeup to fit the description of our character. Ideally, as there was only 2 of us in a group, we both needed to help with filming and editing so we would need another person to act for us. We cast Erin Kellyman as our main character, playing the role of 'Lucy'. Erin has had experience in acting and attends 'The Television Workshop' in Nottingham'. Through this, she has been hired by an agency called 'Curtis Brown' through which. she gets acting jobs. Her latest role was playing a character named 'Cathy' in a show on Channel four called 'Raised By Wolves'. We chose Erin because of the experience she had with acting (as she also does acting at BOA school in Birmingham), we decided that she would be most suitable to play Lucy as she would be able to pull off being serious and emotional well.

'To kill a dead girl' Title sequence'

HOW TO KILL A DEAD GIRL TITLE SEQUENCE

We created a title sequence using ____. By doing this, we first inserted our 'headlight productions' company logo. For the title of our film we used the colours Red, white and black as white symbolises innocence and the word 'Kill' was highlighted in red to symbolise blood. The font that we used also looks like it would possibly be in a book or be written using a typewriter, this shows that the storyline of the film is about Lucy (the main character)'s life as it is almost as though it is an autobiography about herself and what she has been through.

We then added text about who filmed, edited, added sound, who was the producer and who wrote the screenplay. Once we have filmed, we will edit the title sequence over the clip and add sound.

Synopsis of 'To kill a dead girl'

'To kill a dead girl' is a thriller following the life of a young woman in around her 20's. She has followed a life of abuse and physical harm from a mystery man who she never though she would be able to escape from. 5 years on from her torture, she lives an average life, she owns her own house, runs her own business, she is her own woman...but she can never escape the torment and distress that she was put through, it haunts her every day.

'It's over.' - She would tell herself every day, but as the police soon discover when she is found dead in her house one afternoon, it was far from it.

Production Schedule for 'How to kill a dead girl'.

WHEN- We plan to start filming our opening scene on Wednesday 6th January. 

WHO-We will film our main character (Lucy) who is played by Erin Kellyman. Our aim is to complete the first three scenes, these include pans the first page and a half of our storyboard, these include pans of the characters arms and legs when she is dead, shots of her morning routine: getting out of bed etc and shots of her in a bathroom.

HOW-We plan to use a pan, a close up, a long shot, medium shot, P.O.V shot, medium long shot and then a over the shoulder shot. We will use these shots over the course of the first three scenes. We will use a tripod to ensure that the movements are smooth and the camera is still.

WHICH- The equipment of which we will need will include a HD camera, a tripod for panning shots as well as the mise-en-scene elements of the film such as stage make-up/latex/body paint to recreate the bruises and marks on the characters body. 

Health and Safety Issues- When filming these scenes before applying the make-up special effects we need to do a "test patch" to check that our actress will not have any reactions to the products we plan to use. 

Permission for location- Our location is an ordinary house, therefore it can be any particular house with a good amount of space and lighting. As the house we plan to use is owned by a member of our group we will not need permission to film there, but to be sure that we avoid having any background noise we will make the other members of the household aware of our filming to ensure they do not appear in any shots. 

2) WHEN- We plan to continue our filming on Friday 8th January.

WHO- We plan to film our last scenes of the film, this involves our character Lucy having flashbacks of her being abused and physically harmed, we will carry on filming from the bathroom scene up to the final ending scene. 

HOW- We will use Worm-eye view shots, medium shots, long shots, POV shots and several zooms and tracking shots.

WHICH- We will need to use a HD camera and tripod as well as using props such as a glass (for drinking water), a key for the locking of the door scene as well as using more make-up/latex/body paint to create bruises when needed.

Health and Safety Issues- Within this section of filming there are health and safety issues such as the risk of harm to the actress, in one of the scenes we plan to film our main character falls to the floor dramatically, unless care and control is taken when filming this scene our character could harm themselves during the fall. 

Permission for location- The remaining scenes of the film will continue in the location we used previously, this means that we will not need permission to use the location.